It’s been a while
since I’ve actively done anything with Lori’s Book Blog but I’ve decided to
revisit because there are some things I need to express. I’ve done a lot of thinking about the books
that I have recently read, and I have to say that I feel like there are some
things that I need to get off my chest.
So I felt the best way to do that would be to write a “Dear Author”
letter to express my feelings on some of the latest trends in today’s books as
well as give some basic advice I feel every author would benefit from
receiving.
I may catch a lot
of backlash for this and that’s okay, but these are my opinions and my opinions
alone. I do feel like these are concerns
a lot of the reading community has as well based on reviews I’ve read or
discussions I’ve had with other readers.
Dear Author,
I would like to
thank you from the bottom of my heart for the work and effort you all put into
your work. It serves an amazing form of
entertainment that helps me escape from everyday life as I get lost in your
characters and your stories. However,
there seem to be a lot of “trends” lately that have become almost the
norm. I feel like it’s important to address these
“trends” because quite frankly, they’re taking away from my reading experience. There are 3 very important tools every
author should use before publishing their books. It’s beneficial to you as the author to publish
your very best possible work because it will help further your writing career. Readers will appreciate these things and will
come back for more of your stories in the long run:
1) Find a decent beta reader (or a few). In case you don’t know what a beta reader is
or does… it is someone who reads your story after your first draft. They help you find plot holes or find things
that may be necessary to add to the story so your readers will get a better
grasp of not only the story itself, but of the characters. They are specifically there to help you put
out the best possible book you can. If
the beta reader is doing their job it can help make your 2 star read become a 4
star read. My biggest advice when it
comes to choosing your beta readers is to take your time to find those that not
only work well with you, but who are not afraid to tell you when something
doesn’t work. I would caution against only
using close friends and/or fans as they may not want to hurt your feelings or
don’t want to see what others would see as potential problems. Listen to their advice, you don’t have to do
entire scene changes or anything drastic but maybe something as small as an
extra line or even as small as one word, could make a huge difference. This may
take a few books before you find your perfect team, but trust me… it will be
more than worth it for you. I have a lot
of experience beta reading, I’m also a part of a great beta team so if you need
good beta readers, I can recommend some or you can ask other authors who they
use or recommend. You’ll know when you’ve found your team… you’ll see it, not
only in your work, but also in how your fans respond to your work.
2) Editing your book is a MUST. There are tons of great editors out there who
will find your spelling, punctuation, and all other grammatical mistakes. If you can’t afford to hire a reputable
editor at least find someone who can go over your document and help out as best
as they can. Spell check is also a
useful tool, don’t rely on it as it doesn’t always know the way you’re using a
word… (ex ~ it could change “there” to “their” or “your” to “you’re”). I am not entirely bothered by editing
mistakes because of my experience with unedited manuscripts… so I’ve learned to
over look a lot, but this is not the case for most readers. Unfortunately, the past few months I’ve read
quite a few books where the editing was completely nonexistent and I ended up
spending more time trying to figure out what was supposed to be said than I did
actually enjoying the story (commas can definitely change how a sentence reads). Bad or no editing can ruin the experience for
the reader which will only hurt you as the author.
3) ALWAYS do your research and check for
consistency. Details are key, whether
it’s writing about a specific place, life changing events, a medical condition,
a career, a specific dialect, or even a
specific type of food… whatever it is… if it is not something you are
intimately informed about make sure you not only do your research, but double
and triple check it. After you’ve triple
checked, try and find an actual person to confirm your research with… whether
it’s a fan of yours who is from the south and can translate how to say a
certain phrase or you make contacts at the local police department where your
story is taking place. As much as we
all depend on Google this day and age… it is not always correct. This includes international authors who are
writing about a specific country… make sure your facts about that country are
correct. Sometimes, something small as a
way a phrase is used differently in different countries can take away from the
story you’re telling. (This also refers
to beta readers and editors… if you are not from the U.S. but are writing about
it… find an American beta reader and an editor that can Americanize your book
for you. Same goes for other countries.)
“Trends”
that have become so normal lately, that readers feel they need to read reviews
with spoilers in order to make sure it really is something they would enjoy:
1) The Alpha Male. (This is only regarding contemporary
romance books.) Now I will be the first
to admit that I love a good alpha male.
I’m married to alpha male so I can compare and swoon all at the same
time. However, it seems that some
authors are trying to “Out Alpha” other authors and I have to say that this is
not working the way they want it to.
See, there is a fine line between an alpha male and abuse (in this case
I am not expressing my opinion but speaking from experience). A true alpha male loves his woman and would
do his absolute best to never hurt her… this doesn’t mean that he won’t say
something that comes off as cruel or hurt her feelings (Because believe me, you
take the bad along with the good when it comes to alpha men), but his ultimate
goal is to keep his woman happy. This is
why most of us readers find the alpha male so incredibly sexy in contemporary
romance novels. There are times
when crossing that line works… by this I mean dark romance reads,
captor/captive type romance reads, sometimes even sadism and masochism BDSM
type reads. There are
many of them where the story line takes the characters to a place where that
line is crossed… which, when done right works well for that particular story
line.
2)
Cheating in books. **Now
before you continue let me be clear and say that I’m referring to a committed
relationship between a hero and heroine where actual physical cheating occurs…
let me also be clear and say this works differently (at least to me and most of
my fellow reading friends) in standalone novels vs. a series that follows the
same characters for more than one book.** Okay this is not only a tough one but also a controversial
one, because it realistically can come down to the readers personal preference.
Now, I’ll be the first to say that I HATE
cheating in books but I’m not going to say that it can’t work in your story…
and yes I mean, when done a certain way it can even work for me. However…
if you release a stand-alone novel that take us through a beautiful journey of
the hero and heroine falling in love and in a committed relationship and
then he or she cheats as the climax of the story... You’ve lost me… totally,
100% lost any interest. When you use something
like cheating in a book, it’s important to take the time to redeem the
character. It shouldn’t be… she took him
back because she just didn’t want to be without him or he took her back because
he’s always loved her and can forget this one mistake. They should delve into the reason why it
happened and how it’s being fixed. You
need to show us as readers that he or she will not cheat again which takes more
than a few chapters at the end of the book. I’m not saying it has to be so neatly wrapped
up every little detail was hashed out, but at the same time if you’re cheated
on… it’s a big deal and takes time and effort to move past it. If you plan to write a few books revolving
around the same characters and cheating is part of the story line… always take
the time to end each book with a level of hope that things can be worked out (I’m
not talking about cliffhangers here, what I’m referring to is if your heroine
walks in on your hero in bed with another woman and you end the story
there? Chances are, you’re going to lose
some readers… so add an extra chapter and it can be as long or as short as one
paragraph but give us at least a tiny pinch of hope). We want to believe they have an everlasting
love when we read those last few words.
Depending on the number of books you write in the series revolving
around those same characters try to have any and all cheating take place prior
to the final book, you want that last book to show the reader how much the
characters have grown and how they worked out their problems so we can see and
feel that everlasting love. (This is
another place a good beta reader will be able to help you, if your story is
taking you to the cheating road, find a reader that hates it and let them read
it, see if it works for them or if there is something more you can add to make
the actual cheating take a backseat to working the relationship out).
3) Playboys/Bad boys… Here is one that has
become extremely popular. I don’t mind a
playboy, bad boy, or even a man whore… because, let’s face it sometimes guys
are just guys and do stuff for the sake of doing it. I’ll be the first to admit
that it’s more than entertaining to watch a playboy trip over his feet trying
to win the girl. However,
when you tell me that the Hero “Does NOT do love OR relationships” I
need a reason. It doesn’t have to be
lengthy, but it has to be something I can figure out from his past. Maybe he was raised in foster care, maybe he
had a mom that took off on him, or an ex that totally shattered his heart. If I read a book where the hero has a group
of amazing friends, has never been in a relationship, and comes from a solid
loving family but still says no to relationships and love, I don’t see him as a
play boy, badboy, or man whore… I see him as a complete douchebag. I’m not entirely sure when being a man whore
just for the sake of being a man whore became sexy… now if he has a past and
that past leads us to believe that he doesn’t understand love then it can turn
it around… we’re more apt to say “aww, I want to fix him” if he has a reason
for saying no to relationships. If he is just a guy being a guy and hasn’t ever
had a relationship… instead of saying he doesn’t do them, have him say he just
hasn’t found the right girl yet or he’s sowing his wild oats until the woman
destined for him comes along. You want
your readers to want to see him overcome his past and find that one special
woman that he can love unconditionally.
You want them to root for him to find the beautiful happily ever after
he deserves.
4) Heroines…
We all love a good heroine, but lately some of our heroines have come
off as either doormats, have no personality, are crazy to the point of being
psychotic, or are just too perfect to be believable. There are numerous ways to make your heroine
one everyone can love… make her funny, make her kind, make her strong. She can be almost perfect, but she needs a
reason why she’s almost perfect. However, in all reality she needs a few flaws
so we as readers can connect with her, but still love her. She can be incredibly shy or timid, but we
want to see her break out of her shell in a positive way (and I don’t mean
sexually, which is fun but we need more.).
She can be incredibly broken, but again, she needs to come back to
herself in a positive way. Sometimes
heroines are made out to be stalkerish or downright crazy and while that can be
entertaining, it can also take away from the story. You want your readers to love your heroine,
you want them to connect with her, and you want them to root for her to get the
happily ever after she deserves by being worthy of the hero. Crazy, mousy, whiny, and stupid women don’t
deserve the perfect hero you created.
5) Cliffhangers… Now I’m actually laughing
while I write this because y’all probably think I’m going to say don’t do them
or I hate them… but I’m not and I don’t.
Cliffhangers can be almost fun… BUT, you also have to be careful how you
use it. Always leave your readers
wanting more. Have them read that last
word and think “nooo” but in a good way.
You almost want them to be cursing you while saying “Oh, she/he is good!” You want them feeling almost rabid for your
next book. But I will caution you and
say… if you plan to write a series that contain cliffhanger endings – seriously
think about making sure your readers are aware that your book is a part of a
series.
There are many
tools out there to help you create an amazing story every reader can love. Write your story with fresh ideas and
memorable characters. Depending on how
you write your stories there is always someone out there willing to help and it
is extremely beneficial for you to take advantage of any and all help. The bottom line is… this is your story and
the beauty in that is you can write whatever you want to write, but if your
goal is to publish, you want it to be a story that people will not only talk
about but love. Use the tools you know
about and ask other authors, bloggers, literary agents, publicists, or even readers
for any recommendations regarding beta reading, editing, research, or even
brainstorming. Just remember, taking
advantage of the help you can receive to help make your manuscript absolutely
perfect… can put your name out there for not only readers and fans, but for
traditional publishers as well!
Sincerely,
Lori
E. L. James had a google + hangout with some UK Fans yesterday and my girl Gitte was one of them. She was super excited when she locked a spot in the hangout with The Author of one of her Favorite books. In order to get a spot in the hangout they had to submit a stand out review of Fifty... now I'm not going to share the entire email but I will share a quote from her review because it's just down right true for just about every girl and/or woman I know: